Sumi H. Inkblot

I have TAKEN A LOOK AT THIS! I am a Baroness of honor, don'chta know. ;) Mmmm...maybe it's just because we were discussing FMA, but I'm thinking "chimera". (Ach, poor ...

Hey 'Lainna! I don't think I've commented on Lyla before now, but I've been reading it all the way through. :) There's not much in the way of bad grammar ...

Aw, that was, in a weird way, sweet. ^_^ I'm a sucker for sibling-relationships stories. Again, as seen in a previous review, I spotted very little in the manner of ...

Here I'm a bit indignant, as water is as much life as it is death. You can't live without water, just as much as you can't live without death. If ...

Oh, dear. Now the poem's heading into the whole "darkness is bad" realm. 'Tis so common in poetry, and while the rest of the series is salvageable, I'd suggest ditching ...

As with part 1, I don't see a point to this, other than "I don't fear scary stuff", descriptions of flesh being maimed and random words slapped onto the bottom. ...

Erm, what ? What's going on here? It's all telling, no showing, and I don't see a point/meaning behind it. It had some nice description -- especially the hungry beast ...

Lohl, I really enjoyed this! Seriously, it's like watching myself. Minus the art shop, you wouldn't catch me dead in a art shop. I'd knock everything over. XD I'm very ...

Yeah, Grace is a brat. A selfish, spoiled, self-centered, egotistical brat. Nice character. ;) There are two big problems here: 1. You're not spacing! Space it up. 'Tis an unappealing ...

Muchly cool! Definitely worth the spacing wait. ^_^ Thanks, by the way, for that. Makes all of our jobs much easier. :D This seems to be a sort of mishmash ...

First, Vince, I'd like to start this review by saying that I didn't read the last three to four paragraphs. Why? That shall be implied in time. Oh, and you ...

Hmmmm.... My very first impression is that you're doing more telling than showing. You're telling us a whole bunch of stuff about this we even have a name for him ...

Hmmmm....I like Nora a lot at this point. :) Mostly because she seems like an older, calmer version of me (I'm OFTW!!!), which is not only insanely cool but kinda ...

Hon, you've got a "On Top of Old Smokey/Spaghetti" rhythm going here, dipping occasionally into plain forced rhyming. That said, it's not a good thing . :lol: I notice that ...

Beautiful imagery. I didn't notice any grammar slip-ups, so no complaints there. ^_^ glaring down at me, entrancing me, surrounding me. Each of the distant pinpricks seems to be scrutinizing ...